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Kid B
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frighten me

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What up Keith,

I'm writing you this note with hope you don't choke
out on your new rocket
all the hotties stop to watch it
you pop a wheel clockin ninety
people are frightened right beside me
seeing a 21st century Knievel
thru a bleak and weakened keyhole
shit the ego can be evil
when you rock the horse of danger
to impress the hordes of strangers
the helmet just an ornament of a chariot of catastrophe
seeing a life fly right by passing me
they pray you're not another tragedy
so when they look on they really sad you see
vying for a broken veil of vanity
its fuckin insanity
illusions are fickle people can be fake
half these cats won't even make your wake
the Jersey Shore is a dirty whore from the parkway to route 34
jughandles, jugheads, jezebels, jocks and DWIs
I'd school you on Charlie but you prolly wouldn't even believe me
they gave homie a mural in paint roller 3D
back in 93
it was a morbid sight to see
I'm telling you this shit cuz you frighten me
leggo your ego off the bike Keith

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Post by Kid B »

You can get with this :worstposter: Or you can get with that :doom:
Funny if the former was the one to spit the track
With a melody like an accordian ALL CAPS like PHRO1
I step back in the session like a samurai shogun

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Props to your girl.

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Post by Reason »

SeaTownBlues wrote:I don't even really like poems that rhyme. They make me hella rattled.

But, an incredible poem that rhymes will always beat an incredible poem that doesn't rhyme.
i agree with everything you said 100% percent except the "hella" part so that makes it like 95% or something
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Post by Reason »

speaking of samurais, damn if they're right
but how's tom cruise tellin me the last samurai's white?
fuck it, i'm speeding, even if i'm leaning in thick sand
not on cruise control cuz i'm just a kid, man
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Post by theaggravatedjew »

Damn reason thats ill wordplay
Lines hot like a Georgia Day
Teachin kids in life and on the net
Runnin from the cops and livin without regret

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Post by Kid B »

Regrets, I've had a few
But my moms said I ain't mad at you
It matters so I stick wit the liquids
They more solid than the gaseous dipshits

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Post by THE GOLDEN STRING »

Kid B wrote:Regrets, I've had a few
But my moms said I ain't mad at you
It matters so I stick wit the liquids
They more solid than the gaseous dipshits
DIPSHITS ARE A DIME A DOZEN
RADIO SHIT ,THE RAP GAMES BUGGIN
EMOTICONS WITH TWO SUPPOSED THUGS HUGGIN
EMCEES STEP TO TGS AN EXPERIANCE A MUGGIN//


WHAT WHAT
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Post by Kid B »

Muggin in The Source or Double X L
Thuggin is a force, trouble and sex sells
How many times does his rhymes involve bodying?
Copying the 90s gangsta rap genre in these modern days

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Post by THE GOLDEN STRING »

Kid B wrote:Muggin in The Source or Double X L
Thuggin is a force, trouble and sex sells
How many times does his rhymes involve bodying?
Copying the 90s gangsta rap genre in these modern days
FUCK THIS...
I STEP INTO THE MIDDLE AN TEACH YOU BOUT A CYPHER...
MAKE A RAPPER SHIT HIS PANTS AND HIS CREW CHANGE HIS DIAPER...
IF CATS BE STEPING TO ME THEY MUST BE DUSTED
CUZ IM KNOCKING BITCHES OUT WITH PIPES THAT BE RUSTED/
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Post by remixture »

Of course we keep in touch,
I mean that's what best friends do.
Next time you come around,
I'll pretend you're less beautiful.
Those lines just strike me for some reason.....I'm gonna definitely read your redo.....

later catdaddy

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Post by remixture »

wake up.

foiegras
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Post by foiegras »

i gots to get a page. i'll kill fools. with some sea urchin iodine fully loaded dune buggys, like Herbie unloading gallons of crude spunk on Lindsey's dipstick parapalegic foster brother (damm, check out the viscossity)

hahahahahaahaa

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When prostitutes get buried in the desert...

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When prostitutes get buried in the desert,
Trying to apply funnels to cacti water glands
Which sand baring reptile nuzzles next to her corset
And serenades scorpion tailwinds until he delicately pulls the garter past her elbow
(Where Arthur Ashe used to wear his wristband)

Playing 62 pickup with your syncopated hiccup oeuvre
Which janitor at the Louvre is really your grandfather
Who
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i havent read it yet... but the title is HILARIOUS.
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A DAY.... A POEM I WROTEABOU MY SON, MY SELF , AND THE SHELF

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JUS LKE EVERY DAY..


I LOOK FOR ADVANCE...
IN PERSON,
LOOK TO JUMP A FENCE
TO REACH THE POINT THAT I FIRST MENT
I CRINGE AT PEOPLES TINTED WINCE ,
POCKETS CARESS LINT
I REACH IN MY MIND TO RECREATE THE DENT/

THE DENT THAT FIRST PLACED NOT FIRST PLACE
DAYS OF GRACE NOT DRUNKINESS,
WHEN IT WAS OK ....
NOT WORK BUT SCREAMING
OVER F'S NOT A'S/

I GRAZE NOW LIKE COWS
BUT I HOLD TO WATCH OVER,
OVER HIS SHOULDRS...
TAKE HIS PICS AN THROW THEM IN A FOLDER,
TO SHARE WITH HIM AS BLOOD GROWS OLDER/

NOT A FULL PIECE JUS A LITTLE ON MY MIND
I DUE WISH I KNEW HOW TO PUT SOMETHING REAL TOGETHER
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Post by THE GOLDEN STRING »

THE FIRST PART WAS REAL NICE MAN..
FIX THE STRUCTURE AT THE END IT MADE IT CONFUS ENNNNNNNNN



NICE THOUGH ...I SUCK WITH WORDS...
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Post by Kid B »

The rewrite is better, tenfold. More heart is in it and this change seals the deal

So even when I start from scratch
Someday it will be there, all you have to do is ask.

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Post by axel foley »

i dug this man. you and 360 are hands down my favorite writers in this forum. your subject matter doesn't deviate too much or at least not the stuff you post online but i dig them nonetheless.

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mutha fuckas jock me!

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cause im dope when i be flowin
suckas try ta stop me but i honk and keep on goin
im simply not the type that like to kick it with a square
i kick it wit da bitch whos filthy rich cause imma player
time and time again man niggaz always ask me
why do hoes jock you when you spit raps so nasty?
i look'em in they eye and reply to they question
"game is to be taught...so let me teach ya ass a lesson"
I'll fuck around and get banned, off top I'm a sav.

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Post by Smithee »

:grin:
Moolah wrote:
Smithee wrote:I'd like to personally thank Andrew Bogut.
:cheers:

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Post by Smithee »

kick another freestyle & give us folks @ philaflava an update on the craig's list sitch....
Moolah wrote:
Smithee wrote:I'd like to personally thank Andrew Bogut.
:cheers:

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Re: mutha fuckas jock me!

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Shade A Grade A wrote:cause im dope when i be flowin
suckas try ta stop me but i honk and keep on goin
im simply not the type that like to kick it with a square
i kick it wit da bitch whos filthy rich cause imma player
time and time again man niggaz always ask me
why do hoes jock you when you spit raps so nasty?
i look'em in they eye and reply to they question
"game is to be taught...so let me teach ya ass a lesson"

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Re: mutha fuckas jock me!

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THE GOLDEN STRING wrote:
Shade A Grade A wrote:cause im dope when i be flowin
suckas try ta stop me but i honk and keep on goin
im simply not the type that like to kick it with a square
i kick it wit da bitch whos filthy rich cause imma player
time and time again man niggaz always ask me
why do hoes jock you when you spit raps so nasty?
i look'em in they eye and reply to they question
"game is to be taught...so let me teach ya ass a lesson"

:pause:
"....."
I'll fuck around and get banned, off top I'm a sav.

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Re: mutha fuckas jock me!

Post by THE GOLDEN STRING »

Shade A Grade A wrote:
THE GOLDEN STRING wrote:
Shade A Grade A wrote:cause im dope when i be flowin
suckas try ta stop me but i honk and keep on goin
im simply not the type that like to kick it with a square
i kick it wit da bitch whos filthy rich cause imma player
time and time again man niggaz always ask me
why do hoes jock you when you spit raps so nasty?
i look'em in they eye and reply to they question
"game is to be taught...so let me teach ya ass a lesson"

:pause:
".. :rickjames: ..."


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WHERE'S THE AUDIO??
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Post by THE GOLDEN STRING »

T-Wrex wrote:WHERE'S THE AUDIO OF THE MJ TRIAL??
:sylvester:
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THE GOLDEN STRING wrote:
T-Wrex wrote:WHERE'S THE AUDIO OF THE MJ TRIAL??
:sylvester:
:MrT:
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T-Wrex wrote:
THE GOLDEN STRING wrote:
T-Wrex wrote:WHERE'S THE AUDIO OF THE MJ TRIAL??
:sylvester:
:MrT:
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Re: mutha fuckas jock me!

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Shade A Grade A wrote:cause im dope when i be flowin
suckas try ta stop me but i honk and keep on goin
im simply not the type that like to kick it with a square
i kick it wit da bitch whos filthy rich cause imma player
time and time again man niggaz always ask me
why do hoes jock you when you spit raps so nasty?
i look'em in they eye and reply to they question
"game is to be taught...so let me teach ya ass a lesson"
first count ya blessins bitch then get ya ass to steppin trick
my smith and wesson straight be wreckin shit
in da bud club ... bess believe i got a membership
sheeeeit... the more i spit the more daps i get
the more higher i am the more claps i hit
craigs list got me in debt like some economic crisis
so im slangin coke and playin poker still rhymin
still got that timin.... still line after line an
throw my "balls" on the table BITCH thats my buy in
talkin bout my coke bitch so stop ya cryin pansy
i been cawpin "coo bricks" like my name was Stanely
and givin bitches "raw dick" like my name was Andy
i stay lebron fitted from da "head" to toe HO
"phuck a phlamin phila phaggot homosexual!"
I'll fuck around and get banned, off top I'm a sav.

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