CTR LEGACY THREAD

ms_horlicks · Post by **ms_horlicks** » Tue Apr 12, 2005 2:34 am

nice twist on this one hope, lol pretty cool

love i tells ya, it can be a fucking bitch

ms_horlicks · Post by **ms_horlicks** » Tue Apr 12, 2005 5:37 am

your draining her water coloured smile
stealing the jade from her champagne
how much can i stand
to understand why such grey mirrors reflect
onto something so pure
you pathetic piece of shit
leave worthy gypsys to clean your pits
why is it you refuse to accept
you cannot move to future rents
if your indebt of learning from mistakes
shes glorious throwing rocks in lakes
but at times its too late
shes frozen on the depressive plate
is it neccesary you not see pass
the trouble
you fumble fall and swallow
but you will never see the truth
if your heads stuck in the land of shallow
ill follow her everyday
to make sure she never moves
may her grace never have to
shes too beautiful for your motionless moods

i wrote it awhile back, thought id share

pz

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Tue Apr 12, 2005 2:51 pm

I like you style kid.

Seriously though, I'm diggin' this...

"...if your indebt of learning from mistakes
shes glorious throwing rocks in lakes
but at times its too late
shes frozen on the depressive plate
is it neccesary you not see pass
the trouble
you fumble fall and swallow
but you will never see the truth
if your heads stuck in the land of shallow
ill follow her everyday
to make sure she never moves
may her grace never have to
shes too beautiful for your motionless moods..."

There's a solemn independence in this piece, strong but still kind of...cold I guess. All I can think when I read it is...out of reach.

I like it alot.

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Tue Apr 12, 2005 4:58 pm

damn, I really wanna go throw some rocks now.

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Tue Apr 12, 2005 5:05 pm

I'm convinced these killers don't really want drama
work 'til my wallet's fatter than gilbert grape's mama
I

foiegras · Post by **foiegras** » Tue Apr 12, 2005 6:11 pm

What energy in the universe can be generated from white women crying?
Generations of artisnal apple butter gets swept into your motion sensor Roomba
With no bumper or ability to determine spatial equations
Never bump into the sheetrock again
It

ms_horlicks · Post by **ms_horlicks** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 3:24 am

go on, throw em rocks! lol

thanks alot hope, glad you digged it

stay up peoples :)

pz

ms_horlicks · Post by **ms_horlicks** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 3:26 am

ohhh hot damn, on fire. shit i was really feelin that flow! ahh, so refreshing to read some dope stuff. keep em comming.

p.s is this a song you got lined up? coz id love to hear that audio

RacquetballGangsta · Post by **RacquetballGangsta** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 3:36 am

Imagination,breathe
Sacred poems(passwordsforwalking) into secret gardens
hidden stanzas lumber toward gaping keyholes
Lying on the beach there

RacquetballGangsta · Post by **RacquetballGangsta** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 3:41 am

i like this.
reminds me of this song called "miss me"at least i think its called that, by the dresden dolls..u should check it out, theyre awesome in any event.

RacquetballGangsta · Post by **RacquetballGangsta** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 3:46 am

wow. ur an artist i guess.
so how can i explain this?
its so visceral.
ur good, kid..tough, but good...ur good, u!
analyze that, billy

lol @ leni reifenstahl

RacquetballGangsta · Post by **RacquetballGangsta** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 3:48 am

did u watch eating gilbert grape yesterday? lol i never saw it, but my sister was watching it and she commented immediately on gilbert's mother's considerable girth. cool.

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:07 am

Thanks Ms.Horlicks, and this a song I been working on(more so in my head, then I just threw it down last night), but I have no "real" way to put audio up...I been thinking about just using a cheap ass mic and the sound recorder on my computer just to see what y'all would think...but I dunno...

RBG, thanks man...And naw, but my friend mentioned it being on HBO the other day, so I'm sure that's how it popped into my head...If you've never seen it, you should, it's a pretty dope flick.

Thanks for the looks y'all.

RacquetballGangsta · Post by **RacquetballGangsta** » Thu Apr 14, 2005 11:50 am

Scintillation
The science of it she means
She dreams
She waits
She melts

Lies to you sometimes
But that

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Thu Apr 14, 2005 3:27 pm

This was dope RBG...You're a pretty versatile writer, knamean?

theaggravatedjew · Post by **theaggravatedjew** » Fri Apr 15, 2005 9:58 pm

Im having trouble catchin the flow on this piece. Can you compare to a flow on a song so I can try and catch it?

Gregg Popabitch1 · Post by **Gregg Popabitch1** » Fri Apr 15, 2005 11:07 pm

i'm dissappointed there are not a-team references.

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Sat Apr 16, 2005 12:26 am

Gregg Popabitch wrote:i'm dissappointed there are not a-team references.

yeah, i didn't want to seem like a total biter.

Jennie C · Post by **Jennie C** » Sat Apr 16, 2005 1:50 am

Hope, how tall are you?

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Sat Apr 16, 2005 1:00 pm

Haha, why? How tall do you want me to be?

Nah, I'm like 5'6-5'7 or something like that, so I'm not quite a midget.

Vlad Analogue · Post by **Vlad Analogue** » Sat Apr 16, 2005 2:41 pm

Just wondering...I don't really browse this forum, but I rap, and I write all kids of other shit...

If so post somethin'

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Mon Apr 18, 2005 11:43 am

most folk here do either poetry or keystyle, but any writing is welcome and appreciated.

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Mon Apr 18, 2005 1:08 pm

^^^^^I don't think this was intended as a rap. this was very free verse, seems a lot like stuff I've seen at poetry slams.

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Mon Apr 18, 2005 1:39 pm

BeHemoth wrote:^^^^^I don't think this was intended as a rap. this was very free verse, seems a lot like stuff I've seen at poetry slams.

Thats what I was thinkin'.

theaggravatedjew · Post by **theaggravatedjew** » Mon Apr 18, 2005 3:56 pm

HopeLess wrote:
BeHemoth wrote:^^^^^I don't think this was intended as a rap. this was very free verse, seems a lot like stuff I've seen at poetry slams.
Thats what I was thinkin'.

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Mon Apr 18, 2005 7:57 pm

my demons dream of eatin heathens and its open season
leavin me no options to be proper within reason
feastin on my lease on life it's at least as twice the problem
and I don't see no signs that it's remotely close to stoppin

feedin me regurgitation so you'll get the spittle
and I could be the bigger man but I don't like this even a little
get all silly giddy up there's plenty 'nuff of falseness
eatin every harvest so you don't have to face the solstice

torture on the brain is worth twice its weight in pain
so I'm fully without anger when I go to hit the aim
split the gain, shit's the same, I'm weathered from tryin to change it
and when you paint your happy face it makes me dream of facelifts

alteration altercations all the shame and hatred
I deserve a grade for everytime you test my patience
I'm lacin...........ancients..............fit to explode
siliencin the stop that you get from the go

you playin legos and not tryin to build
it's like I'm talkin to myself but I don't know how to feel
and that's real, I'm not practiced at fakin
why you gotta be a pig just to bring home the bacon

PHRO1 · Post by **PHRO1** » Mon Apr 18, 2005 9:28 pm

BeHemoth wrote:most folk here do either poetry or keystyle, but any writing is welcome and appreciated.

Jennie C · Post by **Jennie C** » Mon Apr 18, 2005 11:45 pm

I don't know, I was just curious.

I like how you write, btw.

Mindbender Futurama · Tue Apr 19, 2005 12:20 am

the lyrics were structured off Eminem's verse from 'I Don't Give a Fuck' and Pharaohe Monch's 'Bring It On'... but with a next level twist.

Reborn Deformed

the rebirth of Mindbender
was designed by divine devils
Armageddon with nice weather
but your back up got their spine severed
I'm delusional, it's beautiful
Superman-dingo Lover, but if you want me to fight,
i'll slander and strangle you players worse than Bobby Knight
you're wacker than the motherfucker that started that gimmick
your debut is a comeback attempt cause to me you're already finished
stop talking shit, i wonder how mediocrity can be so preposterous
even the optimist in me sees the need for this to be deposited into memory banks without common sense, so before the technological apocalypse swallows all continents,
i'll empower myself with vowels and consonants,
targeting to hit heads harder than a charging rhinoceros,
my name is Adhimu Stewart, i got soberphobia and i smoke copious amounts of chronic
until i'm so idiotic, i wanna top it off with a mouthful of some household product
poison droplets transform me good, Deceptions of an Autobot
i bought a lot of copies of your album,
so losing your spot on top hurts worse when you're falling off
you beg for censorship of higher intelligence when my mind fire be too close for comfort,
motherfucker, you get no love like C. Delores Tucker
from complications realizing the invisible line between God and Satan
i'll cause your brain to be deteriorating worse than motherfucking Ronald Reagan

*off to another world, deep in your mind*
*rhymes that are twisting and blending*

my breathing be giving more fantastic graphics with brain damaged third eye sleight of hand
co-ordinated tactics of playstation 2 256-bit chips, populations sip rhyme saliva Mindbender spits, shut it down, nothing found coming out of your mouth, sucker MC just swallow,
better believe I mindfuck heads until my growing groin is all knowing,
and my performance showing exposing your posing, it appears you're hollow,
it is my psychology, and undefined velocity divine atrocity,
one a kindness rhyme blitz that rips the beat apart, retarded genius artists,
I know what came from Ghost and Rae, the rest perpetrate, impersonating the Purple Tape,
i see evil thoughts in the new breed of sharks, so i float awkwardly, off on beats,
it's abstract precision, ignoring all gravity, magically vanishing out of catastrophies into astral dreams, gradually, i'm shaping your skull like plasticene,
*all over the track*
gimme the M-I, gimme the N-D, gimme the B-E-N-D-E-R, BENDER, amazing powerful thoughts
are assaulting all of your five sensors,
you cannot defend or try to pretend the ignorance didn't end when they entered,
i'm the invisible inventor of the infinite pinnacle at your vertex visual residual real flesh digital ill-literal, biblical super scientifical madness, constructing corruption, weapons of massive destruction for their second coming of nothing, FUCK EM!,
when i'm in a beyonder genre complicated modern monster larger than lifelike type strange mic embrace love affair headspace, i'm undergroundbreaking, elevated to another foundation,
with this brand nubian old english,
it's a timeless rhyme climate highness virus rhythmic sickness that will never diminish,
even when you think it's finished...

*chorus*

Mindbender rhymes get reborn deformed,
kick in the doors of perception, mic wreckin C-4 blows veterans egos from mainland to seashore
my gameplan is to expose everything my brain can do,
like get a great band together and make a song called cosmic peanut butter and space jam, so many flavors available, did you taste that?
i'm the essence of the future, but when in your present-s, you're getting gifted, young and Black, but ever since i was gizzm, i was different,
paid no attention to the songs of the ignorant,
its bliss when the purity hits, any rhyme can be reborn deformed, so it don't stop, and it don't quit.

word

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Tue Apr 19, 2005 1:08 am

Jen wrote:I don't know, I was just curious.

I like how you write, btw.

That doesn't make me uneligible does it?

And thanks...I like the way you are.

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