CTR LEGACY THREAD

Kid B · Post by **Kid B** » Tue Apr 05, 2005 11:28 pm

hobbits hop out the shire when you set their trees on fire
its the return of the king to the fellowship of the ring
scroll DNA genetic double-helix in the pen and pad
it'll be like De La Hoya defeating Felix Trinidad

Cash Rulz · Post by **Cash Rulz** » Wed Apr 06, 2005 8:27 am

Switchin' styles quicker than men in drag, seige your crib like Leningrad
Then I bag your broad and kick that game to make her bend her back
And cause I'm killin' that she'll get her friends and have them in the sack
Then I write a song about it just to have hittin' track

Cash Rulz · Post by **Cash Rulz** » Wed Apr 06, 2005 8:44 am

I gotta hear an audio. Its very poetic when I read it, but that doesn't always translate into a good song.

theaggravatedjew · Post by **theaggravatedjew** » Wed Apr 06, 2005 3:13 pm

lol@ that whole situation. My friends and I talk shit to one another all the time so ragging on each other in rap form is no big deal.

rstennett · Post by **rstennett** » Wed Apr 06, 2005 3:25 pm

theaggravatedjew wrote:lol@ that whole situation. My friends and I talk shit to one another all the time so ragging on each other in rap form is no big deal.

Thats how i am to, If you can dish it,you sure as hell better be able to take it, ya know.

Kid B · Post by **Kid B** » Wed Apr 06, 2005 3:30 pm

Sit back relax open a pack of cracker jacks
spit tracks back to back over instros in the Cadillac
rolling down the strip doin a little over 20
balling like a pimp cruising for older honeys

curiouscharles · Post by **curiouscharles** » Wed Apr 06, 2005 4:46 pm

they say honey goes bad if you don't keep it in the fridge,
so check your age range target, check it back a smidge,
kids is too young, but cougars is too old,
stay away from fat bitches, you'll get lost in them folds

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Wed Apr 06, 2005 5:19 pm

fat girls need love too, I'm to provide it
my boys is like naw duke, but I'm undecided
cause I for one am down for keepin it simple
while yall chase a dime I get a couple of nickels

Shade A Grade A · Post by **Shade A Grade A** » Wed Apr 06, 2005 8:13 pm

Cash Rulz wrote:I gotta hear an audio. Its very poetic when I read it, but that doesn't always translate into a good song.

u suck... hes already better than u!

Nowell's Soul · Post by **Nowell's Soul** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 1:12 am

Very cool, I'm with these guys, an audio would be much appreciated.

Nowell's Soul · Post by **Nowell's Soul** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 1:16 am

I could fit a millennium of microbes in the pocket of my bomber jacket
But soon as the ball drops
LCD projectors get Segway jacked from the ceiling
Into the back of your cranium
A little too close to the heathens
The masterful reasons that worlds collide
In spite of rising affiliations with stuffed animals
That use q-tip ends to drown out the pudding supply
The ergonomic way you drive by so easily
Merging into the background
Mostly, part of the scenery
Buy weary builders pour concrete after the Native American ceremony

As abstract as your writing is, the flow is always on point.

I know you get the same type of props and criticism everytime you post, but your writing bugs me out because it's really not like anything else. It's dope and almost annoying at the same time. But I always check for your stuff cause you never know what it's going to be like.

Nowell's Soul · Post by **Nowell's Soul** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 1:18 am

I have no idea why I'm the first person responding this if it's been up for over a day, very cool, unique style, very solid writing.

Nowell's Soul · Post by **Nowell's Soul** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 1:48 am

I know this girl, she's a red sunset.
Loves the south, country music, wants to live without regrets.
I met her, fate introduced me, that's just something I believe,
Except the rose glow went down before I had a chance to breathe.

She like's the ocean, flip flops, and Starburst jelly beans
Calls me up when she sees a commercial that makes her think of me.
We drink, dance, laugh, and trust each other without a second thought,
It's comfortable, she's beautiful, she's everything I'm not.

Every picture I have of us, her tongue's out, she's laughing.
She's not an angel, she's too stubborn to let her wings do their thing,
She just won't let that happen.
She hints, winks, whispers, and she kicks me,
And no matter what she does she looks busy.

She can't listen to one song to the end, she always skips tracks
She knows where she goes, she belongs, doesn't have to ask.
When she can't sleep at night, she tells me why.
She's got the ocean in her eyes, the same attitude as mine.
Even when she complains, it sounds like she's singing.
A red sunset, and she's always dreaming.

My skyline has clouds, always covering the sunset.
The best dream I ever had, she was the only one in it.
She knows nothing's impossible, believes it, you can tell,
She's a big piece of heaven and a little chunk of hell.
But I never really believed in life before I saw her.
I was living slow, trying to keep my head above water.
Until she came to the rescue, steering towards the horizon
Truthfully, I know for sure, she's the reason why I'm even trying.

The reddest sunset I ever saw, it set too quickly.
I'm certain of this, and I'm not certain of anything.

Peace

Kid B · Post by **Kid B** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 3:43 am

I got new nickel-plated twotwos and two bottles of Yoo-Hoos
If your rhymes are doo-doo, I'll conjure up some voodoo and spit through you
Electric rhyme through it, the mic - the conduit
Rock a Show Daily like Jon Stewart

Kid B · Post by **Kid B** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 3:58 am

I want to write a poem
That strikes your dome
Sends you driving home
Thinking, damn, he was fresh!
I want to write a poem
That encourages critical thinking and captivates
The critical mass
I want to write a poem
That catches you off guard
I want to write a poem
THAT'S TIMELESS
Written in Braille for the sightless
So they can feel it
I want to write a poem
That's contained in a Florida orange
So you can peel it
And drink its citrus
I want to write a poem on a bank deposit slip
And watch it collect interest
I wanted to write a poem
That can be transmitted via a dialtone
Or how about a rhyme to the melody of a xylophone
I want to write the rhyme that moves you to tears
On second thought
I want to write the rhyme that moves you to cheer
I want to write a rhyme that don't even rhyme
Or a haiku that is simply sublime
I want to write a limerick
About a man and his penis
Who stalked Serena and Venus
He flew over to Wimbledon
And showed them his little friend
Now he's in jail with the meanest
I want to write a rhyme
That's genius and brilliant
I want my rhymes to be worth a million
I jerk off in books giving life to words
And I like verbs, and prepositions, predicates and double entendres
Rest in peace to Andre who never seen me rhyme
I want to write a rhyme that lights up your mind
I want to feel the Sign O' The Times
And rhyme under the Graffiti Bridge while Purple Rain falls
I want to rhyme the Star-Spangled Banner
Then say, "PLAY BALL!"
I want to rhyme in sign language
I want to write something that defines anguish
I want to write lyrics that inspire your spirit
I want to write and recite
So you Slam heads can hear it
I want to die on the mic and then myself, you'll inherit

ms_horlicks · Post by **ms_horlicks** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 7:52 am

beauty live fused
standing on a stage
im overwhelmed with praise
my eyes cream in the delight
of basslines created through flight
to reach my inner soul
thats been so cold, for so long
i stopped myself from aching
i stopped the force of acting
because love isnt just one colour
nor is it one person, in one world
it changes like seasons
even if you bind it for true reason
circumstance does not help
when love doesnt want to pick up
left me hanging in a false bubble
when all along love knew id fumble
now im coated in fudge basslines
raspberry berets taste so fine
let the chords string a heaven for me
sweep me away to a harmony full of keys
that dont ask for me to please
nor ask for me to leave
but embrace my living and take to my stay
i watch as bodies move with me
like chocolate sauce poured over my layers
that make up this creature
who thought its love made me desirable
but i was half way to death
cheatin myself as a ebony rose coffin
that waited for love to come stop it
now i remember what it was
to be alive
when the stick hits the drum
and fingers grip microphones
a love like no other, a lover i cant bother
returns me a favour
gives me another chance
to be alive
alive again

random, but its just how i feel

pz

Cash Rulz · Post by **Cash Rulz** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 8:11 am

And keep it fluid like hot lava chillin' with a hot mama
And if she got drama I'll skate like Aksana
Viule, unless we click like links in Hyrule
But if it stinks then I'm cool cause I'll shrink like ice cubes

Cash Rulz · Post by **Cash Rulz** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 8:13 am

I lost focus on the "chocolate sauce over your layers" part, but then got my mind out the gutter and enjoyed an excellent piece.

ms_horlicks · Post by **ms_horlicks** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 8:33 am

:P thank-you very much cash

goodlookin out :)

Cash Rulz · Post by **Cash Rulz** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 10:14 am

She's a big piece of heaven, and a little chunk of hell.

You had me at hello nigga, lol

Its a poetic way to say, I love that crazy bitch.

Kid B · Post by **Kid B** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 10:15 am

Limerick style:

Ice Cube's the nicest dude out the N.W.A. clique
The first one on the solo tip who truly made it
Now a household name with bountiful fame
Put out some hip-hop classics and then faded

Cash Rulz · Post by **Cash Rulz** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 10:17 am

Very dope. Really enjoyed this.

remixture · Post by **remixture** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 10:44 am

Damn, dude, I really enjoyed this piece.....it rocks.

theaggravatedjew · Post by **theaggravatedjew** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 12:22 pm

"I'm Still Writing About the Same Goddamn Thing " You do it so well, another dope piece, as far as im concerned we should have a sticky of all your works in this forum.

theaggravatedjew · Post by **theaggravatedjew** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 12:28 pm

Now Im wonderin, Are we their yet? I'm not sure
Which personas are acts and which are pure
Personal Evolution, or only for the love of money
Either way, I gotta respect the man for doing something.

Shade A Grade A · Post by **Shade A Grade A** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 12:29 pm

Kid B wrote:I want to write a limerick
About a man and his penis

ScholarWenis · Post by **ScholarWenis** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 2:11 pm

niggaz is frontin'/ but they physical frames is portly/
manic depressive cuz my daddy wouldn't buy me a horsey/
i hang with crackers, goox, spics and chiggers/
just another surrealist amoral word twisting n!gger/

Kid B · Post by **Kid B** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 6:00 pm

check the figure, in the BeaM 3 with Thief's Theme on repeat
the vigorous beat makes the cypha complete
whether rollin in a six series or a Cherokee Jeep
the hoes get no dough that's for real I'm cheap

BeHemoth · Post by **BeHemoth** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 6:24 pm

grown leaps and bounds just to keep the sound relevent
fuckin up your sytem better congregate all delegates
know this much dont talk rough when all delicate
bringin heat up to heavens gate for the hell of it

brnfrzebreakone9 · Post by **brnfrzebreakone9** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 8:02 pm

thanks for the feedback, did anyone else read it at all?

CTR LEGACY THREAD

I'm Still Writing About the Same Goddamn Thing

Writer's Block

beauty live fused

Re: Writer's Block