New beat+new rhymes

Renessis · Post by **Renessis** » Mon May 14, 2007 5:46 pm

http://www.myspace.com/renofheavens

"This Is Where Its At"

Can't write hooks that well yet, but were workin on it.

machine · Post by **machine** » Mon May 14, 2007 6:11 pm

good shit man, listened to this before you posted it. dig the beat, not really into your rhyme style though. keep it up mang.

Renessis · Post by **Renessis** » Mon May 14, 2007 6:43 pm

Oh coo, beat me to the punch.

Beat was a little tricky to hit, 106bpm, usually on some slower ish but s'all good.

Funk Docta Bombay · Post by **Funk Docta Bombay** » Tue May 15, 2007 5:51 pm

I think the beat-rhyme combo works well, very breezy/westcoastish which isn't my shit in general but I can't front on the execution.

the drum programming is really on point, I think some of the percussion in the back could be moved to the forefront though (The bongos/congas).

ardamus · Post by **ardamus** » Tue May 15, 2007 7:39 pm

this some feel good music....nice face-paced rhythm and the guitar makes me think of Hawaii

it feels a bit muffled for some reason......low you should take some low end out of the bassline in there.....rhymes are cool and chorus's not too bad

good shit though

Piff Tannen · Post by **Piff Tannen** » Wed May 16, 2007 1:37 am

pretty cool shit, keep it up. this is the type of shit my homies would love, espcially in the summer. not to say i dont dig it myself, but if i pass it along, theyd eat it up, so ill pass it along

Renessis · Post by **Renessis** » Wed May 16, 2007 5:22 pm

Yo thank you fellas. I appreciate the critism and propers.

As far as the mix goes its not the final cut, just one that I did in a few hours and was happy with. It's hard to make a nice mix with my current 'monitors' shown below. Working on getting some real ones. Finally got money to buy a bed, so monitors are next. I'm gonna try to mix my album when it's finished at the studio I intern at...we'll see.

Current monitors:

One's I'm looking at

WES RESTLESS · Post by **WES RESTLESS** » Wed May 16, 2007 6:25 pm

Sounds pretty hot man.
I like how there are plenty of changes and background elements going
on in the beat to keep one's interest.
Also like the fast tempo.
Like the congas in the background...really fills it out.
Also like how it seems like you panned some of the elements (ie. hook guitar)
gives it a very wide full sound.

torchETB · Post by **torchETB** » Tue May 22, 2007 4:20 pm

Renessis wrote:Yo thank you fellas. I appreciate the critism and propers.

As far as the mix goes its not the final cut, just one that I did in a few hours and was happy with. It's hard to make a nice mix with my current 'monitors' shown below. Working on getting some real ones. Finally got money to buy a bed, so monitors are next. I'm gonna try to mix my album when it's finished at the studio I intern at...we'll see.

Current monitors:

One's I'm looking at

haven't listened to it yet. i don't get on myspace at work, and am less inclined to do so at home.

big difference in monitors there. you'll know once you sit down. are those Yamahas? even below their vaunted NS-10M, that's cadillac shit you're aiming for. must be nice...

Renessis · Post by **Renessis** » Thu May 24, 2007 4:58 am

The new Yamaha HSM-80's are $350 a piece. Not nearly as much as the NS10's which are the famed monitors. Lately I've been thinking about getting the KRK 8" because I know two cats who have them and love them. Plus you can get em for 500 a pair at Guitar Center. And if my ASCAP card works for monitors it will be a little cheaper.

DirtyNeedles · Post by **DirtyNeedles** » Fri May 25, 2007 2:00 am

beats are pretty good... something about your voice reminds me of manchild

Renessis · Post by **Renessis** » Fri May 25, 2007 5:42 pm

DirtyNeedles wrote:beats are pretty good... something about your voice reminds me of manchild

Isn't that the dude from Mars Ill? Haven't listened to much of him, so I don't know the similiarity.

Thanks for the listen.

DirtyNeedles · Post by **DirtyNeedles** » Sat May 26, 2007 1:03 am

Renessis wrote:
DirtyNeedles wrote:beats are pretty good... something about your voice reminds me of manchild
Isn't that the dude from Mars Ill? Haven't listened to much of him, so I don't know the similiarity.

Thanks for the listen.

yeah thats him. I could just be trippin but thats what came to mind right away when i heard the first track.