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whoa

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meditative yes

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Post by Sumthin_Funky »

i liked it.

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Post by ric »

:cheers:

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Post by Reason »

a lot of rap makes me wonder whose ear is that?
While I represent for beats like jack Kerouac
on the road, I stay careful and aware of tracks,
I see the fakes behind our back, itג€™s a power trap
Took advantage of our blacks like auerbach
Claim law and order acting like jerry orbach
I kick a raw rap tryin to forsake all that
They want a look but my image is rorscach
no land is my land ג€“ Iג€™m a poor manג€™s rich man
Making my stand while they pour more quicksand
Nets 2022

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Post by Sumthin_Funky »

Wrote this short little shindig to this beat http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oMTuXK-V-VE. I'm sure I flow it different in my head than you will in yours, but fuck, just tell me the shit is dope and let's move on with our lives.

Possessed late night deep into the AM
Confessed my regrets but I havenג€™t forgave them
Steady as the beat gets playin in my speakers
Already asleep delayin my REM with ethers
What am I chasin or perhaps Iג€™m being chased
Displaced state of mind gettin buried into crates
Frequencies enrage each page written
Iג€™m sittin on a wavelength hangin ten
Changin pens before the ink runs dry
If you think nuns lie and wish Pun didnג€™t die
Then we reside synonymously
But Iג€™d rather be flossin my teeth with knives
Than to coincide inside this trashcan of flies
Tryna get my slice of the pie? Take caution
And plenty of endorphins cause Iג€™m straight morphin
Many men snorin while I stay explorin
Into whatג€™s unknown, whatג€™s unknown, whatג€™s unknown

Now try to tell me what exactly is the unknown
Is it the dial tone when we pick up the phone
The trepidation shown inside when weג€™re alone
Can meditation atone with use of the dome
How many of these clones you think robbery built
How many ghetto faces are sewn in a poverty quilt
Too much water has probably spilled beneath me
But no bodily illness will ever besiege me
Psyche, I must be losing my fuckin mind
Intertwined with a psilocybin
Guess it was the wrong pine

Life Visualiza
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Juzzz gimme some feedback

Post by Life Visualiza »

at school act a fool after school in the after noon
blast the toon in my head set till its time to let my head rest
pick up the mic and leave ruins of tombs
crack heads stick needles and influence the womb
don't sleep on the muthafucka you can't even dream of surpassing
i get rough like Bruce Willis on die hard scenes of action
leaving crowds speechless like non fluent aphasia
fly like a bird sickness spread the influence in Asia
competition is like a fiends blood flow i shoot up
leave crews fucked keep my inner beast concealed
break it down for the fakes who don't kapiesh the skill
got a clear vision through the sniper scope
all up in your nose like its dope
shine blinding when Iג€™m rhyming then sacrifice him
he get burned with afterlife sin then reappear to remind him
i make minds boggle like when they find fossils
rhymes hostile stars in order army like alignment
shoot on sight assignment let the clouds clear light enlight men
with sun light equipped with a cold heart that pump ice
the blood runs blue in my vein we all get old and die
they say you ain't seen shit till you seen a grown man cry
huh never elevate too much cuz thats gonna be a high fall
you fuck around with the wrong people then maggots fill your eye ball
my eyes close my lights gone
wake up to see the gates unveil before the white smoke

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Post by artMajor »

thanks to the government, how they build the roads
and put them pothole size manholes
right where my wheels goes?

its a plot that surely broke down my car
butt fuck it i dont have to walk far
cause on every street corner theres my favorite bar

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Post by duhbreez »

wait wha?

got beef, im a grill then roast ya
having u wish this beef aint real like boca
and im a take it to the top like elevators
hello haters, greetings via penthouse
can i kick, shall i proceed?
if u were in my position
it might make ur nose bleed.
im for real, but im not from neptunes
step 1, im not to step 2
step 3, should be your left shoe
step 4, your not even in my sight
i punch with straight lefts
you fight for gay rights
i told you i was for realz bitchez
my life should be filmed in 4 reelz, bitches
just like rambo
dressed in camo
nukes attached to a camel
me on the hump, blowing shit up!
im like a retired MJ
cuz i playin mang
im in the express lane
tryna express game
please stay in yo lane cuz u aint interesting
in other words...ur shit dont interest me!

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Post by JaH BLaZe »

bar none, so i dont need rhymes to show and prove style
look how far ive come ,wise old soul in no search of a nubile
ooh-child, things are gonna get brighter like a big Bic lighter
this niggas a fighter, with a big dic , make ya chics slit wider

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Post by Shade A Grade A »

it aint even a battle when im involved identify the body and that is all who want it wit grade huh yall garbage nobody got it better like im jim harbaugh rep the bay 408 cali for ni AYYYYYE i give a fuck bout what haters say if a hoe fuckin wit me u know she paid
I'll fuck around and get banned, off top I'm a sav.

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Post by dubs »

"Dime And D: Best Kept Secret"


Hoo this weirdo duke trife life visualiza?
probably smokes schwag, guzzles budweiser
reminiscin bout his bitch, back when she had a dick
but now she got titties and a fake ass clit.
you sick, aint talkin bout ya raggedy rhymes clown
Thinkin to yaself "but so (s)he a dime now"
WOW! you really that much of a homo?
no vehicles when i say you on the low-low.
You the type to have 3 cuts in ya eyebrow,
not cuz you tryna wild out, jus cuz you keep
gettin punched in ya eyepiece, by guys that chinese
and shorter than 5'3". Try me, u catch 3 shots, no IV.
I cant get witcha(nh), you sound like a bitch uh
Choose the perfect words to paint a perfect picture
then take that picture and smash it over your fuckin head.
Employee wrote:dubs being the West Coast's ric, his thug is bonafide and justified.

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Re: Juzzz gimme some feedback

Post by JaH BLaZe »

Life Visualiza wrote: i get rough like Bruce Willis on die hard scenes of action
:killacam:


you fuck around with the wrong people then maggots fill your eye ball

this right here this line is nasty. just sick imagery. you everything else has nothing but some reworking.

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Post by JaH BLaZe »

this is no ether, just a grip of kids with shit lyriks, ms paint and bad photoshops in their sigs
and this goes back 2 years, and i know all this, took me a few seconds to scroll thru it
empty v generation, wanting dubbed out cars yall never afford, paid with advance money those cats will never record
i spit complex a head known to entertain
the old carrying the new like asians on the n train

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Post by artMajor »

i shoot rhymes that dont miss but they still dense bricks
heavy D and flowin O squeaking fresh fly kicks
im the owner, gm and coaching staff calling every play
im spots 1 to 5 on the floor sparking up the fade away J

every dunk number 1 on ESPN top 10
10 foot too low fucking raise it 20 then
3 point line too close my 3's from half court
you can't play in my league im in my own sport

Odnet
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Post by Odnet »

I write a rhyme like a blacksmith shapes the steel
They say the pen is mightier than the sword, Iג€™mma make it clear
lyrics penetrate, the audience venerate
I want a diehard following like Heavenג€™s Gate

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Post by EichTurner »

^^ better yet guyana hit like the brooklyn bombers
in a bomber bomb a train car style wars i got good karma
like numa numa drug consumer p.l.o. sumo arafat
i'm multi cultural bring the border sauce holocaust, fuck the cost
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World War 2 Battle Rhyme

Post by CancerDancer »

assert rhyme structures to yank clench and blend yo tiny mind into a trench
rewind into world war 2 time
slow mo salivary glands assign me as the psychopath lieutenant rank
you the private as known as harass around the threatened specie rank
peace for me is sounds of bullets into the decease zippp overtime underneath they sank rest in peace
frankly yours is ceasefire to flank my pet peeve dip under my lip and teeth while i grip the microphone sober
conceive mankind disaster you attend to be the unknown soldier beneath the blind pastor
thank me when i lend you the colored Nerf rifle
you depend on ג€˜my rifle is my best friend, its my life, i must master it as i master my lifeג€™
hourglass tickin yo life to descend into the dirt where your brotherhood leave a stench of the trench foot
my word is like a mustard gas that i cook leave a smother look drenched you understood


doesnt flow but tell me what you guys think about it.
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Post by JaH BLaZe »

fucck the cost, wholesale distro this cypha
seperate the boss writers from the weak and soft ass biters
from genesis to genocide, I wear a hoodie
so wathatmean I'm cut from the recipe of homicide

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Post by EichTurner »

no homo no homo this shit's the jungle bros promo
extra tracks do the math mad knowledge like sylvia plath
syke in the category of finer dikes
brought to the last supper hunger games like modern christ
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Sumthin_Funky
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Just some bullshit

Post by Sumthin_Funky »

Disruptions occurring during sleepless routines
Tossing and turning Iג€™m yearning for new means
And methods of paralysis, but stress challenges
Brain callouses and deranged balances
Thriving within like a toxin I feel boxed in
Locked in an auction helpless just watchin
New ideas get washed in a fray and concoction
Of emotions rolling away Iג€™m afraid to get lost in
Discovery is the key creation is the keyhole
Under me is a pillow relation about zero
Everybody wanna play pharaoh, I wanna play fair
Though my dreams are rare to hold anything but sex and weird shit
The music is congruent with tulips bloomin in spring
The rhyme is my savior, two shits is all I bring
Critiques my shitג€™s weak, but shit itג€™s a new week
So Iג€™m gonna take a shit and try to get some fuckin sleep

edit: Added a verse.....
At this point I’m way beyond restlessness
Won’t remember this song or what it embellishes
So the message gets mixed up, shaken, and stirred
Women get fixed up with lipstick and blush it’s absurd
I need to catch a couple Z’s and a cup size double D
These honey dips are hovering above me like bumbles bees
It’s funny how money, weed, and ki’s flee my brain with ease
But how quickly shorties drop to knees when mentioning either three
It seems my circadian rhythm is out of order
Lacking water or perhaps I should flip a silver quarter
Before I enter rigamortis I gotta store these thoughts
Counting sheep flocks for three blocks as trees watch
But nothing comes to my aid, still awake it’s eternal
Perhaps I should rewind try everything in reversal
There’s no rehearsal I gotta nail it one shot
Sleep is imminent but I’m not setting the alarm clock
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Post by JaH BLaZe »

keep christ in christmas ,keep tricks in st patricks day
me get nice wit tha quickness, dont need gun clips to clap stray
jah blaze , now say it the way you hear me slowly spit it
like some deep flem you know me, with a flow known infinite

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It's not a game

Post by EichTurner »

Always strategic leave beekman paraplegic
And finger jack his bitch youג€™re yacub weג€™ve found out your secret
Always scratch off my lotto with a penny hardaway
Three the hardway my darts spray outline lady marmalade

Swift murder jump start your day this is my cranium matinee
I scategorically deny thereג€™s anything I canג€™t fade
Youג€™re in trivial pursuit Iג€™m getting all kinds of loot
If you really think you can pull it off then motherfucker shoot

Motherfuckin chutes and ladders Iג€™m zooted up nothing badder
You think its game im killing mcג€™s off in a pattern
Boppin out to crab apple when I scrabble grap the scapel
Save your so called life sweet memories is all you has bro

Now who wanna get deep down and dirty
You donג€™t have a damn clue and itג€™s already 11:30
Time to go to bed heads do what you parents said
But donג€™t wake daddy cause these toys are made out of lead
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Post by EichTurner »

you got some ill multis in there. (liked the toxin boxed ect. run) that's why you always got to keep writing utensils by the bed , somethings bound to pop in your head :cheers:
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Post by I Smell Like Un Kasa »

fuck arithmetic, you softer than chinese whisky dick/
Lets meet up in an urban area and kick the ballistics kid/
smokin' sherm lookin like an eagle spotted in Georgia/
on the dance-floor workin' a Gozer The Gozerian aura/
Prepare yourself now for the six man wedding!

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Post by dubs »

You ain't ballin, fuck u actin wyld for?
Bitch ass niggas still shop at Caldor
Put my dickinhermouf, she a wild slore
Y'all bore me to tears, hear me loud snore.
Employee wrote:dubs being the West Coast's ric, his thug is bonafide and justified.

Sumthin_Funky
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Re: The Queens Chess-Piece and the Mad Assassin

Post by Sumthin_Funky »

I thought this was mad dope. Props.

JaH BLaZe
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can you dig this

Post by JaH BLaZe »

can you dig this
ten Wigs for a pack of cigarets
a slow crawl new direction for fear
another building in the mecca
asociated with a form of terror
in an important election year

when theres an endless pit for people
seeking liberty freedom fair an equal
but zombies lined up at timesquare cineplex
waitin to see the sequel

my seeds havent even seen the scope
of this whole world gone mad in this new age
whos the true sage, we need more than hope
we need grace and its bout time this whole place
can use more ways to cope in it

doorways to perception - open it

... tbc

JaH BLaZe
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Re: The Queens Chess-Piece and the Mad Assassin

Post by JaH BLaZe »

gonna have to look at this later when i can take a good look

Sumthin_Funky
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Re: Just some bullshit

Post by Sumthin_Funky »

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.

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