CTR LEGACY THREAD

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Sat Apr 03, 2010 10:15 am

poem 4 inside looking out is the only poem here. everything else is bullshit thesaurus writings but yeah poem 4 i liked it. but it needs more body. maybe like 20 more lines that can be edited down to 14.

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Sat Apr 03, 2010 10:25 am

Texas Raised Mikey wrote:I'm funny when I'm drunk but sometimes I get rude.
I use the two second rule to see if a bitch is prude.
I'm always coming up like a barrel of crude.
I bust nuts on hoes that are flaky like fish food.

hoes flaky as fish food , you know they got a sexual issue
break beats on my face so i feel music, not they menstrual tissue
but now in the spring time i bring rhymes to the board with the freshness
got no work, but thats no worries, 'cause im so deft with this

dubs · Post by **dubs** » Sat Apr 03, 2010 3:41 pm

JaH BLaZe wrote:
Texas Raised Mikey wrote:I'm funny when I'm drunk but sometimes I get rude.
I use the two second rule to see if a bitch is prude.
I'm always coming up like a barrel of crude.
I bust nuts on hoes that are flaky like fish food.
hoes flaky as fish food , you know they got a sexual issue
break beats on my face so i feel music, not they menstrual tissue
but now in the spring time i bring rhymes to the board with the freshness
got no work, but thats no worries, 'cause im so deft with this

Nigga you aint deft wit it, you takes so many L's you gotta deficit
Check it like the rhyme, your swine and im a butcher in his prime
All I'll use is some scissors like dikes do
you're all some faggots, but I still like you.

Mercuthio · Post by **Mercuthio** » Sat Apr 03, 2010 5:17 pm

thanks for checking my scribbles

dubs · Post by **dubs** » Sat Apr 03, 2010 6:40 pm

Mercuthio wrote:Poem No. 2: Sloth (aka Man Wasnגt Meant To Lie On A Couch)

The opaque obtuseness
Of an existence
Flooded
By the ceaseless waves
Of enervating wealth

These preponderant pleasures
Produce a lackadaisical sap
Who languishes in his lethargic stupor
Neck-deep in delectation
Permanently preoccupied
With maintaining
His hebetudinous satiation

I need to google half this stuff. gimme some context clues lol.

dubs · Post by **dubs** » Mon Apr 05, 2010 3:44 am

Stoop kid shit verse stunk worse than my poop did
Dont know why his raps are crap better get a clue kid
I got more arms than two squid, you don't wanna battle
I' can hear the snakes rattle, and he's too scared to leave gabble!

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:11 am

dubs

Joined: 11 Jan 2010
Posts: 249
Location: Im at where your sister went.
Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:44 am Post subject:

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Stoop kid shit verse stunk worse than my poop did
Dont know why his raps are crap better get a clue kid
I got more arms than two squid, you don't wanna battle
I' can hear the snakes rattle, and he's too scared to leave gabble!

he go by dubs, but really they call kid dumb in the suburb
with an A-B-C 1-2-3 rhyme scheme ,this kid is some herb
Jah Blaze be on that extra next shit, like how Mexicans in Texas.. exit
check this, i only got one more bar, only way you can see me is under the stars

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:15 am

you listening to too much jedi mind tricks hahaha

dubs · Post by **dubs** » Tue Apr 06, 2010 2:22 am

JaH BLaZe wrote:
dubs

Joined: 11 Jan 2010
Posts: 249
Location: Im at where your sister went.
Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 2:44 am Post subject:

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Stoop kid shit verse stunk worse than my poop did
Dont know why his raps are crap better get a clue kid
I got more arms than two squid, you don't wanna battle
I' can hear the snakes rattle, and he's too scared to leave gabble!
he go by dubs, but really they call kid dumb in the suburb
with an A-B-C 1-2-3 rhyme scheme ,this kid is some herb
Jah Blaze be on that extra next shit, like how Mexicans in Texas.. exit
check this, i only got one more bar, only way you can see me is under the stars

Come to my neck of the woods and you'll be left nekkid in the hood
Where we drink beck's and smoke woods, filled wit jars of that good
You aint on some extra next shit, you next to get your neck split
But thats what happens when clowns rappin and they don't protect it.

Stoop Kid · Post by **Stoop Kid** » Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:15 am

DA fuck, why you gotta pop off at stoop
im just hangin out, but ima throw you in da noose
tha kid on the track brang nuthin but tha troof
P00187970 on my jail card Whatchu know about that proof

I'll rip it twice cuz dubs be stinkin like my socks
I tell that bitch stop starin go kick some rocks
you wanna battle, well ill see you on the street no gabble
Im like the only real dude left, all you squares like to taddle

Stoop Kid · Post by **Stoop Kid** » Tue Apr 06, 2010 4:18 am

If I see my name cross ya lips I'll dump an e-clip
practicin your stackin mixin bloods and crips
dubs aint ridin shit, I had 20s on my 5-0
mustang flow, you like horse dick you homo

dubs · Post by **dubs** » Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:50 am

Stoop Kid wrote:If I see my name cross ya lips I'll dump an e-clip
practicin your stackin mixin bloods and crips
dubs aint ridin shit, I had 20s on my 5-0
mustang flow, you like horse dick you homo

You ain't dumpin' an E-clip, You probly jump in your Eclipse
And speed off like Trademark like he was haulin three bricks
My flow is ree-dic*, you rap like the singer from cheap trick
when it come to horse dick you like catfish's Bee-Itch

*jersey slang for ridiculous

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Tue Apr 06, 2010 1:04 pm

dubs wrote:
Stoop Kid wrote:If I see my name cross ya lips I'll dump an e-clip
practicin your stackin mixin bloods and crips
dubs aint ridin shit, I had 20s on my 5-0
mustang flow, you like horse dick you homo
You ain't dumpin' an E-clip, You probly jump in your Eclipse
And speed off like Trademark like he was haulin three bricks
My flow is ree-dic*, you rap like the singer from cheap trick
when it come to horse dick you like catfish's Bee-Itch

*jersey slang for ridiculous

ridiculous is your little world, nigga i consider you a little girl
sending me PM's when you actin up - PMS

From: dubs
To: JaH BLaZe
Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 1:23 am
Subject: Its on (CTR)
Holla back.

and my shit aint ree-dic-you-less
how im gonna holla back at this scrub with the penis-breath

Stoop Kid · Post by **Stoop Kid** » Tue Apr 06, 2010 5:23 pm

JaH BLaZe wrote: and my shit aint ree-dic-you-less

Dubs please, homie you know you got copied :copy:

Steppin to the stoop you'll trip and hit ya face
megaman flow

im runnin to the finish line
bow down

to the kid, its time to gimmie mine

dubs · Post by **dubs** » Wed Apr 07, 2010 4:39 am

Stoop Kid wrote:
JaH BLaZe wrote: and my shit aint ree-dic-you-less

Dubs please, homie you know you got copied
Steppin to the stoop you'll trip and hit ya face
megaman flow im runnin to the finish line
bow down to the kid, its time to gimmie mine

Yea i got "copied", cuz y'all sloppily bit my flow
Now you gettin bodied, have your hottie call me poppy.
Runnin to the finish line? Fuck outta here with them british rhymes.
I be pushin mad weight, you couldnt afford to split a dime.

I split dimes, and smash(fuck) it like a Mcgwire hit in his prime
It's time, throw on some shine, bout to hit the clubs
U MAD? cuz i zoom past you, while you're strollin in lugz
All i heard, was who's that dude?, rollin on dubs!!

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Thu Apr 08, 2010 6:01 pm

you penguins multimedia presentin? , nigga what, you dont deserve a mention
when it comes to dope words its like im on the wax heron bags, here to wax you fuckin fags
im back not cause im black and bad, but cause i stack them fuckin flags
not the ones you hang on a porch with a stint, the ones that come printed from the mint

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Mon Apr 12, 2010 2:39 pm

and now a big fuck you for every fucka on this fuckin page
fuck you dubs, stoop kid, texas raised mikey, jah blaze
fuck the white and blue background, fuck you niggas puffin haze
fuck a tax time, fuck wack rhymes, fuck the start of sunny days

Galvatron78 · Post by **Galvatron78** » Wed May 05, 2010 9:34 pm

Politically incorrect so if you choose to interject
I'll Remind you i can actually rap outside the internet
For four of these I can tell you're a bitch like a sonogram
I graduated again still playing pranks like Dan Monohan

Galvatron78 · Post by **Galvatron78** » Wed May 05, 2010 9:37 pm

Past 30 gave everything but i took advice
I'm at the store trying to bag this Sarah Silverman look-a-like
She's got an ass like Trina it's stickin' out like her bones broke
I lied told her I'm from Cali and my real name is Tone Loc

Galvatron78 · Post by **Galvatron78** » Wed May 05, 2010 9:37 pm

I got about a mil in the bank a house in Roanoke
Hit it first night don't play no games with grown folks
Sick of wack music most efforts by others are pathetic
I could make classics but like Ron White i lack the work ethic

jusk · Post by **jusk** » Fri May 14, 2010 9:18 am

Good concept. complex schemes. flow is choppy.

jusk · Post by **jusk** » Sun May 16, 2010 1:58 am

my words septic
a new guy? shits about to turn hectic
still get respected when it's realized that I sure wrecked it
unexpected
key styles got resur..rected?
Then I can X it. Kill it. My style is perfected

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Mon May 17, 2010 4:38 pm

check it , i give it to ya raw buck naked
i smell sess, but where ya take it?
break it like a tree need to be free, from the earths energys
yes its me, Jah B with the four line key freeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Tue May 18, 2010 4:23 pm

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Fri May 21, 2010 9:08 am

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Sat May 22, 2010 4:26 pm

The Frankest · Post by **The Frankest** » Sat May 22, 2010 6:09 pm

JaH BLaZe · Post by **JaH BLaZe** » Sun May 23, 2010 3:33 am

ok son. ill give a listen to the beat when i can
thanks

Stoop Kid · Post by **Stoop Kid** » Mon May 24, 2010 7:39 pm

It's time we settled this.

Who's got beef? Who wants to test it?

Moses and the jew crew can step.

To my team I'm recruiting Smithee. Who else thinks they can see me?

Smithee · Post by **Smithee** » Mon May 24, 2010 9:23 pm

mannn no non serious

rappers in teh bay can fuck w/ us cept maybe behemoth if he even countz....

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