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Round 1: curiouscharles vs. Evenstar
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Round 1: Cash Rulz vs. M_Link
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Round 1: polarity vs. The Phat Anorexic
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Round 1: reason is yellow vs. foiegras
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Round 1: theaggravtedjew vs. Kilgore786
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Round 1: Gregg Poppabitch vs. ANT8U
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Round 1: RacquetballGangsta vs. hired gun
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many times the most simplistic sentiments are the most powerful. Writing should be about conveying raw human emotion, the words should have life off of the page. This piece achieves that....it almost would ruin the "feeling" if this was too buried in metaphor, and cliche. The upfront earnestness of the words, and in how they are placed...give the prose energy, and its frankness ensure the writer is felt by the reader. Good stuff.
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Hey guys,
Just wanted to make sure ya'll know that you don't have to PM me your verse, just go straight to it. Also, ideally, I'd like for both verses for each person to be posted by the deadline, I hope that was clear. So, even though you have until Thursday at 5 to complete the battle, make sure you allow time for the exchange between you and your opponent. Just wanted to give everybody a heads up. Thanks, good luck ya'll.
Peace.
Just wanted to make sure ya'll know that you don't have to PM me your verse, just go straight to it. Also, ideally, I'd like for both verses for each person to be posted by the deadline, I hope that was clear. So, even though you have until Thursday at 5 to complete the battle, make sure you allow time for the exchange between you and your opponent. Just wanted to give everybody a heads up. Thanks, good luck ya'll.
Peace.
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speak plainly....
cooler hand then luke's when I step in the mic booth
not a tapeworm so this ain't no fluke
follow me like the flute on the path
foot on the gas, we ridin
raise it up, cause I'm fillin the glass
still in the past but focused forward
one of the last to do it how I'm speakin
hip hop mohican whose scalpin cats for treason
destroyin what we created
started flowin in the nineties so I sound a little dated
but the statue limitation is some 3080
never shaky, accelerate life like the navy
this is davey crockett country--wild frontier
so Imma wile out for the time that I'm here, (feel me?)
See what's the use if you don't pioneer-or spearhead
another movement, for the sake of career?
my peer to peer network has me comin in clear
so no matter where I broadcast I'm right in your ear
and please don't think I"m jaded just throwin the pitch
I'm hitch without Jada, wit advice like will smith
The Sith slayer, the force vader fears, whose able to
bag chicks like Laura in Tomb Raider
Haters need not apply, I'm trashin their applications,
crushin their respiration, hopes and aspirations
patience of the Dali, but never will be complacent
conversatin on the present wit the hopes its worth savin
not a tapeworm so this ain't no fluke
follow me like the flute on the path
foot on the gas, we ridin
raise it up, cause I'm fillin the glass
still in the past but focused forward
one of the last to do it how I'm speakin
hip hop mohican whose scalpin cats for treason
destroyin what we created
started flowin in the nineties so I sound a little dated
but the statue limitation is some 3080
never shaky, accelerate life like the navy
this is davey crockett country--wild frontier
so Imma wile out for the time that I'm here, (feel me?)
See what's the use if you don't pioneer-or spearhead
another movement, for the sake of career?
my peer to peer network has me comin in clear
so no matter where I broadcast I'm right in your ear
and please don't think I"m jaded just throwin the pitch
I'm hitch without Jada, wit advice like will smith
The Sith slayer, the force vader fears, whose able to
bag chicks like Laura in Tomb Raider
Haters need not apply, I'm trashin their applications,
crushin their respiration, hopes and aspirations
patience of the Dali, but never will be complacent
conversatin on the present wit the hopes its worth savin
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I could drop so much Flava it'd make Gloss hate
but I'd rather murk a Hope & Thizzell Dance off stage
...w/ a look on my face like I smelt some piss...
even ask Dids, ya gettin dealt w/ kid
for the hell of it...yea, I'm all up in the tournament
so words all get....prepared & served w/ it
herbs'll get blazed, nerds'll get played
it's hopscotch, stomp on squares, they gettin' laced
w/ the freshness, the clean ish, the brand new, wrapped
new car in a bottle smell, straight off the branch
while your weak shit needin' more max. strength Immodium
AD, so hate me & drop salt like sodium
chloride, I'm so fly, could disappear like Odium
LSC w/ LSD all mixed in the symposium
u nickel baggin? fuck that, I'm pullin' in dimes tonight
& laughin' @ the square like Napolean Dynamite
fool...get ya mind right, like Reaganonmics
'cause dope raps? I post thats, inhalin' chronic...so g'eah.
but I'd rather murk a Hope & Thizzell Dance off stage
...w/ a look on my face like I smelt some piss...
even ask Dids, ya gettin dealt w/ kid
for the hell of it...yea, I'm all up in the tournament
so words all get....prepared & served w/ it
herbs'll get blazed, nerds'll get played
it's hopscotch, stomp on squares, they gettin' laced
w/ the freshness, the clean ish, the brand new, wrapped
new car in a bottle smell, straight off the branch
while your weak shit needin' more max. strength Immodium
AD, so hate me & drop salt like sodium
chloride, I'm so fly, could disappear like Odium
LSC w/ LSD all mixed in the symposium
u nickel baggin? fuck that, I'm pullin' in dimes tonight
& laughin' @ the square like Napolean Dynamite
fool...get ya mind right, like Reaganonmics
'cause dope raps? I post thats, inhalin' chronic...so g'eah.
Moolah wrote::cheers:Smithee wrote:I'd like to personally thank Andrew Bogut.
check it, homey ~
depressed, disjointed cats like you tend to get help
foi ain't a rapper, his poems don't even make sense to himself
two facts: you can't write, and you a white clown
been a while since you had common sense like chi-town
now you just common, wishing i was given a bye round
you skip tradition to be that novelty people like now
you ain't a true writer, you're abstract and ramble
it's a shame you get props when people can't even understand you
they're just nice on the internet - politically correct
inside we belittling you with sympathetic, pitiful respect
fuck your soft rhymes, it's just feeble and fake fluff
trade your keyboard in for an easel and paint brush
see i can phila page with flava,
you force words to mix, it's murderous to tradition so i got an urge to spit
serving kids with conviction, you just an ornament
the real gift is on the ground, so get down to earth you bitch
the way you worded scripts don't rap like a tourniquet
an art fag can NEVER win a philaflava tournament
depressed, disjointed cats like you tend to get help
foi ain't a rapper, his poems don't even make sense to himself
two facts: you can't write, and you a white clown
been a while since you had common sense like chi-town
now you just common, wishing i was given a bye round
you skip tradition to be that novelty people like now
you ain't a true writer, you're abstract and ramble
it's a shame you get props when people can't even understand you
they're just nice on the internet - politically correct
inside we belittling you with sympathetic, pitiful respect
fuck your soft rhymes, it's just feeble and fake fluff
trade your keyboard in for an easel and paint brush
see i can phila page with flava,
you force words to mix, it's murderous to tradition so i got an urge to spit
serving kids with conviction, you just an ornament
the real gift is on the ground, so get down to earth you bitch
the way you worded scripts don't rap like a tourniquet
an art fag can NEVER win a philaflava tournament
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a) ten bucks says the deadline gets pushed back b/c cats don't have their rhymes in on time
b) what happens if/when a person doesn't respond to your first rhyme and so you never get the opportunity to post your second - or an even better event - what if dude posts his 2nd and 3rd verses back-to-back with 5 minutes left before it's friday midnight and i'm assed out?
b) what happens if/when a person doesn't respond to your first rhyme and so you never get the opportunity to post your second - or an even better event - what if dude posts his 2nd and 3rd verses back-to-back with 5 minutes left before it's friday midnight and i'm assed out?
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this is actually not a sarcastic comment or insult or anything to be taken frivolously.arlene wrote:Yeah, listen. If you want abstract, go listen to Dose One. Other than that, I write what's in my heart and head.
but anyway: you should try writing from your cunt more. (from the soul - fuck the flowery pseudo-abstract bullshit and cut with words of knives to the cunt of the matter - the real truth)
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this is the most misguided post i've ever seen about poetrycuriouscharles wrote:you could be a little less direct with your themes/messages, otherwise it comes across as elementary
poetry is NOT to be measured by how abstract it is
i'm so sick and tired of people misperceiving poetry to be this mystical entity of which people make abstract, beautiful creations
poetry is IMAGES, FEELINGS, TASTES, COLORS, SMELLS, ETC.
it's not "rumpled up love cloves of lucifer's little toe"
fuck that shit.
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