CTR LEGACY THREAD

Remo the Great · Post by **Remo the Great** » Fri Jan 30, 2004 6:13 pm

LEGACY THREAD FOR CTR

in peace

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Fri Jan 30, 2004 6:28 pm

No doubt. Let's make this place great.

habit · Post by **habit** » Fri Jan 30, 2004 6:35 pm

HopeLess wrote:No doubt. Let's make this place great.

Warcolepsy · Post by **Warcolepsy** » Wed Feb 04, 2004 1:25 pm

http://www.soundclick.com/wargasmsmusic.htm

listen to

Like This

and

Dazed and Confused

thankyakindly

RacquetballGangsta · Post by **RacquetballGangsta** » Thu Mar 18, 2004 3:30 pm

Simplicity in the air, the fairgrounds and littered streets
Saw the lone gunman make way for the panache of Pistol Pete
The history of the city means a liturgy of sit and dream
A Eucharist of lithium, a pugilist with a stick of gum
A prostitute with cocks she sees as lollipops she licks for fun
All tumbling violently into the twilight nigh the setting sun
She asks him if he

habit · Post by **habit** » Thu Mar 18, 2004 7:39 pm

i love this one too. damn.

favorite bit:

let your blindness die peel back your eyelids find your weapon my lesson is in my sacrifice so find your voice and speak as I did will you die in violent fisticuffs or kiss chrysanthemums in silence?

i like how you switched forms.

so many images

remixture · Post by **remixture** » Wed Apr 07, 2004 12:46 am

habit wrote:
HopeLess wrote:No doubt. Let's make this place great.

I just wanted my name at the top for a little while. lol

habit · Post by **habit** » Fri Apr 23, 2004 6:43 pm

beating highways on a lost green
flossed out becoming tried and Tiffany's
fucking strawberry lips 'DON'T KISS!"
ridges bramble sent for me to belly flop in the sunshine.
Pho Ga related sphinx guzzles brandy -
competitive as a blade of grass
fuck the wind, you breathe caress my stomach.
Bullshitting on a sunday with The Dude, I'm his caucasian
but not Iliyavich I'm lapsing about Vietnamese
composite grinds freeze biting into snow grape fruits
and ladle; primitive but ship tucked life machina connection
Paolo to
is
me leaning against the porch supported Carnegie hull forced.
It's a birthmark, trampling sense of desirable cooking lore
Diablo strolls by calcium deficient, winking as old
woman playing this tug-o-war.
Fuck you Walt Whitman. I'll Cover your ass diaphragm fucked
lay weight staying cuffed
and stripped....
But who's bondage is perfect for a surgical whip
ping pong ping pong tic toc with rouge blushes and eyeliner and recreational sedatives (like writing)

Mike (NJJ) · Post by **Mike (NJJ)** » Sat Apr 24, 2004 8:02 am

i give it a "2" i dug lines such as "competitive as a blade of grass" but overall this was a bit a much for my simple poetic mind to handle

Shade A Grade A · Post by **Shade A Grade A** » Sat Apr 24, 2004 2:44 pm

theres no ZERO! .... so I cant vote

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Sat Apr 24, 2004 4:39 pm

Ignore Shade, this was dope...But I feel I can't give a good enough review because alot opf the references are just over my head.

Nice word control though.

Shade A Grade A · Post by **Shade A Grade A** » Sat Apr 24, 2004 4:51 pm

^^ your sucha pussy ass little bitch...! FUCK YOU

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Sat Apr 24, 2004 5:05 pm

Shade A Grade A wrote:^^ your sucha pussy ass little bitch...! FUCK YOU

Shade, you put your opinion out there and I put mine. You calling me a "pussy" doesn't phase me...I know I'm not a bitch. I really have no clue if you are. So I won't speak on it. Besides, I know thats your "way" so just keep that shit in your own threads.

There's nothing wrong with giving feedback or saying you don't like some shit, but saying a person deserves a zero without giving any reason isn't the way to reply. If you're going to put someone's work down at least give a reason.

Shade A Grade A · Post by **Shade A Grade A** » Sat Apr 24, 2004 5:12 pm

HopeLess wrote:
Shade A Grade A wrote:^^ your sucha pussy ass little bitch...! FUCK YOU
Shade, you put your opinion out there and I put mine. You calling me a "pussy" doesn't phase me...I know I'm not a bitch. I really have no clue if you are. So I won't speak on it. Besides, I know thats your "way" so just keep that shit in your own threads.

There's nothing wrong with giving feedback or saying you don't like some shit, but saying a person deserves a zero without giving any reason isn't the way to reply. If you're going to put someone's work down at least give a reason.

Now your deleting my posts BITCH...... fuck you and your poetic taste..... THIS SHIT SUCKED AND SO DO YOU! literally

HopeLess · Post by **HopeLess** » Sat Apr 24, 2004 5:15 pm

Shade A Grade A wrote:
HopeLess wrote:
Shade A Grade A wrote:^^ your sucha pussy ass little bitch...! FUCK YOU
Shade, you put your opinion out there and I put mine. You calling me a "pussy" doesn't phase me...I know I'm not a bitch. I really have no clue if you are. So I won't speak on it. Besides, I know thats your "way" so just keep that shit in your own threads.

There's nothing wrong with giving feedback or saying you don't like some shit, but saying a person deserves a zero without giving any reason isn't the way to reply. If you're going to put someone's work down at least give a reason.
Now your deleting my posts BITCH...... fuck you and your poetic taste..... THIS SHIT SUCKED AND SO DO YOU! literally

Shade. Me deleting your "posts" out of "poetic taste" and me deleted your posts because they have nothing to do with someone's thread is different.

Habit has done nothing but contribute positively to this part of the board and you posting negative shit JUST to be negative is unacceptable.

Keep that in the P&B forum or make your own thread.

1. CONSTRUCTIVE and thorough criticism of the posters on this board.
dont just be a dick and tell somebody they suck, they're moms a whore, and blah blah blah. try to help the next man become a better writer so one day the can finally stop typing and take it to the next level

I'm really pretty laid back as far as stepping in, so just follow that and keep on posting.

Shade A Grade A · Post by **Shade A Grade A** » Sat Apr 24, 2004 5:26 pm

HopeLess wrote:
1. CONSTRUCTIVE and thorough criticism of the posters on this board.
dont just be a dick and tell somebody they suck, they're moms a whore, and blah blah blah. try to help the next man become a better writer so one day the can finally stop typing and take it to the next level
I'm really pretty laid back as far as stepping in, so just follow that and keep on posting.

RULE #1.... I dont follow the rules BITCH

habit · Post by **habit** » Sat Apr 24, 2004 7:22 pm

thanks to all for the explanations and ratings

shade, you must be crazy bored at work

remixture · Post by **remixture** » Sun Apr 25, 2004 5:40 pm

I truly liked this, but compared to your other writings, I give this a "2".

Much talent lies in your fingertips.

habit · Post by **habit** » Sun Apr 25, 2004 10:48 pm

thanks a lot man

Remo the Great · Post by **Remo the Great** » Mon Apr 26, 2004 3:10 pm

i give this a one, just cause i cant really feel something like this written. its on that aesop type vibe and feels like it really has to be heard to be appreciated.

habit · Post by **habit** » Mon Apr 26, 2004 7:12 pm

yes. reading it aloud is the best way to get anything out of something like this

theaggravatedjew · Post by **theaggravatedjew** » Tue Apr 27, 2004 7:01 pm

Cast the first stone in a glass house/
ruinin careers like my names Jerry Krause//
No more legacy yours is canceled like Subaru's/
I'm negative and violent like the evening news//

Kilgore786 · Post by **Kilgore786** » Tue Apr 27, 2004 11:11 pm

So lets abuse crews that choose to loose
by failing to learn the thing the children knew
I blew a fuse while being blown by your girl
call me currency cuz currently i own the world

Mike (NJJ) · Post by **Mike (NJJ)** » Wed Apr 28, 2004 8:13 am

momma used to make my gear, kids were laughin
we were flat broke headaches wit no aspirin,
graspin for acceptance, momma I need loot,
thank God for cousin with dope in his coup

WallStreetCredibility · Wed Apr 28, 2004 5:02 pm

Mike (NJJ) wrote:momma used to make my gear, kids were laughin
we were flat broke headaches wit no aspirin,
graspin for acceptance, momma I need loot,
thank God for cousin with dope in his coup

a dozen years older now I'm financing coups
earned every last pinstripe on my business suit
isn't kids cute? they talk like kings but move like pawns,
them cockless prawns slang rocks while I slang stocks and bonds

WallStreetCredibility · Wed Apr 28, 2004 5:06 pm

WallStreetCredibility wrote:
Mike (NJJ) wrote:momma used to make my gear, kids were laughin
we were flat broke headaches wit no aspirin,
graspin for acceptance, momma I need loot,
thank God for cousin with dope in his coup
a dozen years older now I'm financing coups
earned every last pinstripe on my business suit
isn't kids cute? they talk like kings but move like pawns,
them cockless prawns slang rocks while I slang stocks and bonds

good for you- big fish you get jocked in your pond
but y'all can't afford to park on the block I'm on
go ahead, baby, mock my songs
but I got your old lady cold naked in nike moccasons

Kilgore786 · Post by **Kilgore786** » Wed Apr 28, 2004 11:18 pm

WallStreetCredibility wrote:
WallStreetCredibility wrote:
Mike (NJJ) wrote:momma used to make my gear, kids were laughin
we were flat broke headaches wit no aspirin,
graspin for acceptance, momma I need loot,
thank God for cousin with dope in his coup
a dozen years older now I'm financing coups
earned every last pinstripe on my business suit
isn't kids cute? they talk like kings but move like pawns,
them cockless prawns slang rocks while I slang stocks and bonds
good for you- big fish you get jocked in your pond
but y'all can't afford to park on the block I'm on
go ahead, baby, mock my songs
but I got your old lady cold naked in nike moccasons

I don't mean to yawn but whats up with the rhyme scheme
If you think your portfolio is bigger than mine you may be living in a dream
It seems my mutual fund did pretty well last year
livin kinda broke now, but in retirement I'll have nothing to fear

artMajor · Post by **artMajor** » Thu Apr 29, 2004 4:37 am

don't mean to yawn but whats up with the rhyme scheme
If you think your portfolio is bigger than mine you may be living in a dream
It seems my mutual fund did pretty well last year
livin kinda broke now, but in retirement I'll have nothing to fear

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this kids talking bout folio?
LARK! it took me 5 years to make one
image and text a al olio...
its easier said than done.

WallStreetCredibility · Thu Apr 29, 2004 7:28 pm

Kilgore786 wrote: I don't mean to yawn but whats up with the rhyme scheme
If you think your portfolio is bigger than mine you may be living in a dream
It seems my mutual fund did pretty well last year
livin kinda broke now, but in retirement I'll have nothing to fear

Good for you, you stowed away on this ship I stear
bright idear, like making camouflage from tie dye wear
see I'll break the bank you'll trapse the plank
think outside the box, insider trading makes my paper stank

Stoned Starks · Post by **Stoned Starks** » Thu Apr 29, 2004 11:21 pm

thanks for warming up the plate for me to rock'a gem
cause when i'm hitting dank i'm more dreaded than rasta men
and i'm higher than your average eyesight can capture
I be sonning cats with my rapture, lyrically fathering you bastards

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