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ClockWhy?s
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Post by ClockWhy?s »

Another track I had recently completed.

"Stop"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/clockwhys_music.htm

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Post by bizzlestiltskin »

I think the 38 seconds song was produced better than this one. I think the song itself wasn't bad. It kind of reminded me of an Atmosphere song, but a more grittier version.

The drums on this track were mixed way too loud; they blare in the ears while the other instruments get drowned out. Plus the flute loop was chopped in an extremely distracting way.

I'd like to hear another song over another track. keep at it man, let us know when you have new stuff up.
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Post by M:akai »

i agree, stop's mixing needs a lottta work. 38 seconds definitely sounds a lot better. keep at it.

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