CTR LEGACY THREAD
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ha, yeah...im feelin' this
really liked the opener & ya finished it off sumthin' gold
niceness - i like the short but solid verses
stay up
pz, licks
really liked the opener & ya finished it off sumthin' gold
niceness - i like the short but solid verses
stay up
pz, licks
" cups, d cups, whats in a letter.
i was right about those beautiful beige areolas though.
let me draw on them so it looks like you have two arab big nosed happy faces. "
i was right about those beautiful beige areolas though.
let me draw on them so it looks like you have two arab big nosed happy faces. "
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Little Styrofoam Infinities rev.
They say a picture's worth a thousand words
I say nouns and verbs paint a thousand pictures
They say hey, how you figure?
I figure eight lines that I can make rhyme
I take my time and let the thoughts bleed through the PaperMate
and use my left palm as a paperweight
When you write it down, it's . . . not done
Go through an editing process
Like skin . . . under a hot sun
So when they cry you gotta comply to a deadline
I say I need to take a break at bedtime
And let my words marinate like honey dijon sauce
Dammit . . . I've gone off course . . . again
I pick up this pen
And scribble the alphabet around a bit
Thoughts I have . . . are light energy
I might recite from memory
Or off the leaf
Like I'm doing as I speak
Talk is cheap and dollars make sense
And I sit in my living room with lit incense
And smoke filtered cigarettes
Down til' the glowing amber kisses the fiberglass
Time passes
The night gets replaced by light
Birds are now in flight . . . or in trees
While the windbreeze breathes through the trees
And the leaves we see are merely just a reflection of the sea
See . . . life is like a box of
Those little styrofoam infinities
That fall indiscriminately
All over the carpet when you pop the box to a new TV
Vision is mostly imagery
And sound is only in this vicinity
So I hold my breath and let the air brush through my pores
And throw the page down to the floor.
I say nouns and verbs paint a thousand pictures
They say hey, how you figure?
I figure eight lines that I can make rhyme
I take my time and let the thoughts bleed through the PaperMate
and use my left palm as a paperweight
When you write it down, it's . . . not done
Go through an editing process
Like skin . . . under a hot sun
So when they cry you gotta comply to a deadline
I say I need to take a break at bedtime
And let my words marinate like honey dijon sauce
Dammit . . . I've gone off course . . . again
I pick up this pen
And scribble the alphabet around a bit
Thoughts I have . . . are light energy
I might recite from memory
Or off the leaf
Like I'm doing as I speak
Talk is cheap and dollars make sense
And I sit in my living room with lit incense
And smoke filtered cigarettes
Down til' the glowing amber kisses the fiberglass
Time passes
The night gets replaced by light
Birds are now in flight . . . or in trees
While the windbreeze breathes through the trees
And the leaves we see are merely just a reflection of the sea
See . . . life is like a box of
Those little styrofoam infinities
That fall indiscriminately
All over the carpet when you pop the box to a new TV
Vision is mostly imagery
And sound is only in this vicinity
So I hold my breath and let the air brush through my pores
And throw the page down to the floor.
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"They say a picture's worth a thousand words
I say nouns and verbs paint a thousand pictures
They say, how you figure?
I figure eight lines that I can make rhyme
I take my time and let the thoughts bleed through the PaperMate
and use my left palm as a paperweight " -Kid B-
I really dug the first part of this. Nice Drop.
I say nouns and verbs paint a thousand pictures
They say, how you figure?
I figure eight lines that I can make rhyme
I take my time and let the thoughts bleed through the PaperMate
and use my left palm as a paperweight " -Kid B-
I really dug the first part of this. Nice Drop.
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/reasonnrhymemusic.htmMindbender Futurama wrote: if you recorded it, i would listen to it.
also, i changed the verse up a bit.
i'm probably gonna put it on the "mixtape" i'm working on..."mixtape" aka a bunch of verses over jacked beats done one by one via cool edit pro then puttin all those tracks on one cd. the name of it i already got down :)
KILL KIM JONG ILL
haha, a play on kardinal offishal's lp/mix cd
edit: btw this is a beat from some choclair jawn
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Grade 7, age 11 / I moved to Jersey,
glad to get away from kids who used to herb me
I've been up there and this is real talk right here.Moved to Ny / a town called Katonah / At least 98 % whites /so I just was a loner, and trustme I'm not a dumb or rude man / but in this town you could count Asians on one or two hands
You flow on the beat good but the only spot I recognized was wrong was the pronunciation of disciple.
Extra frsh overall.
pronounciation of what? i never said disciple. or discipline if you had a typoKid B wrote:Grade 7, age 11 / I moved to Jersey,
glad to get away from kids who used to herb me![]()
I've been up there and this is real talk right here.Moved to Ny / a town called Katonah / At least 98 % whites /so I just was a loner, and trustme I'm not a dumb or rude man / but in this town you could count Asians on one or two hands
You flow on the beat good but the only spot I recognized was wrong was the pronunciation of disciple.
Extra frsh overall.
HOLLA
and thanks for the comments
I LOVE CRITICISM. PLEASE, BE FAULT-FINDING. ben wants to get better
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There's a bar at the end when you spit :reason is yellow wrote:pronounciation of what? i never said disciple. or discipline if you had a typoKid B wrote:Grade 7, age 11 / I moved to Jersey,
glad to get away from kids who used to herb me![]()
I've been up there and this is real talk right here.Moved to Ny / a town called Katonah / At least 98 % whites /so I just was a loner, and trustme I'm not a dumb or rude man / but in this town you could count Asians on one or two hands
You flow on the beat good but the only spot I recognized was wrong was the pronunciation of disciple.
Extra frsh overall.
HOLLA
and thanks for the comments
I LOVE CRITICISM. PLEASE, BE FAULT-FINDING. ben wants to get better
Before I met other kids / I thought I was a disciple
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Welcome to my corner
How can I find my very own corner
In a world that's so spherical
and how come i find a mourner
outside every so called miracle
we're all standing in line for the electric chair
all yelling, "me next!"
can't you tell we're all eclectic here?
that's why we use up all the kleenex
we've got less love but more spit
when we exclaim how much we miss you
and that's why sometimes i forget
why foster homes use every tissue
How can I find my very own corner
In a world that's so spherical
and how come i find a mourner
outside every so called miracle
see, even if I found my own section
I couldn't call it a home
because a runaway doesnt need direction
he finds it on his own
I ask, How can I find my own corner
In a world that's so spherical
and how come i find a mourner
outside every so called miracle
In a world that's so spherical
and how come i find a mourner
outside every so called miracle
we're all standing in line for the electric chair
all yelling, "me next!"
can't you tell we're all eclectic here?
that's why we use up all the kleenex
we've got less love but more spit
when we exclaim how much we miss you
and that's why sometimes i forget
why foster homes use every tissue
How can I find my very own corner
In a world that's so spherical
and how come i find a mourner
outside every so called miracle
see, even if I found my own section
I couldn't call it a home
because a runaway doesnt need direction
he finds it on his own
I ask, How can I find my own corner
In a world that's so spherical
and how come i find a mourner
outside every so called miracle

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cool! i just had an argument with my girlfriend, I can't listen to this right now. i'll peep it when the smoke clears...reason is yellow wrote:http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/reasonnrhymemusic.htmMindbender Futurama wrote: if you recorded it, i would listen to it.
also, i changed the verse up a bit.
i'm probably gonna put it on the "mixtape" i'm working on..."mixtape" aka a bunch of verses over jacked beats done one by one via cool edit pro then puttin all those tracks on one cd. the name of it i already got down :)
KILL KIM JONG ILL
haha, a play on kardinal offishal's lp/mix cd
edit: btw this is a beat from some choclair jawn
You're in Heaven right now, God.
Create the universe you dream of.
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Create the universe you dream of.
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awww nawwKid B wrote:There's a bar at the end when you spit :
Before I met other kids / I thought I was a disciple
before i met other kids, i thought i was invincible
my bad...i guess it just wasn't spit clearly. could be the quality...
thanks hopeless and jen
why the sad face, jen?
edit: duh, b/c it's kind of a depressing song...lol, my next one will be fun
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